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Literature / Prose / Fiction / Romance / Erotic©2008-2012 ~heliumgirl77
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Well, the full story is now up - enjoy!

I think this came together really nicely at the end. I was working with a kind of forced atechny; keeping the description direct and artless at first, and letting it segue into a softer more emotionally compelling voice as Amelia's inflation takes hold of her.

There might be a small, additional follow-on story to this one, given the uniwise phone call our heroine makes at the end. :)
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~gener8onslost Dec 7, 2011
great story! :)

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!JohnnySwell Feb 23, 2009
This strikes an absolutely perfect balance of character and deviance. I applaud this effort with the utmost sincerity because it's so rare to read something with what comes across as such an honest voice. Any following you garner from what you write is well deserved. :)

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~MilkyBody Feb 13, 2009
This is just baffling how well this story is written, it's just the right amounts of sexy and fun, not to mention every aspect is articulated upon with scrutinizing detail and care, you should be very proud.

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*Zabuzabotz Jan 4, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
interesting writing style you have. very detailed but it remains realistically told (for as far balloon boobies are realistic ;) )

good job

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~Mastermond Jan 2, 2009
did she deflate?

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~heliumgirl77 Jan 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Wait and find out... :)
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~pneumatic-one Dec 31, 2008
Great story. Having the view point character feel conflicted about the process and results is terrific. The plot device of ‘just a little more won’t hurt’ works especially well in this case. And I really enjoyed the idea she found it both disconcerting and pleasurable. A very good ‘first time’ experience story. :thumbsup:

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~tyghgfhjnj Dec 8, 2008
This is possibly the best inflation story I have ever read.
Amazing work. :thumbsup:
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~PhilcoTV Oct 17, 2008
This is by far the most sensual and sexy breast-inflation story I've ever read. It is exactly the sort of actions that I expect would occur, the feelings I imagine a girl would feel, the emotions that would come into play, if she could inflate her breasts like that. You've captured almost perfectly what I love and enjoy about the BE fetish. Just amazing!

And the writing itself is top-notch, with hardly a misstep. SO much better than most. Now I'm going to have to read the rest of your stories. It will be a further pleasure, I'm sure.
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Mood: Relief ~heliumgirl77 Oct 19, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! Scrummy inflatable feelings are BEst. :-)
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